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Is the word sequence in this sentence correct? "The schedule with the corresponding changes has been confirmed."

 

I want to communicate that the new schedule where certain changes have been applied (changes listed in the previous e-mail) has been confirmed.
 

Thank you, 

Astra

sentance words edited Mar 25 '13 at 07:55 Astra New member

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I think it could be said much more simply:  The revised schedule has been approved.

link comment answered Mar 25 '13 at 09:18 Shawn Mooney Expert

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