Comparing two or more things
How do I fix this sentence?
Schachtel believed that adults are less sensitive to their earlier sensory perceptions due to socialization .
You have to answer the question "less sensitive than what?"
The pattern to follow is "A is less than B" or "C is more than D".
You may have to split your sentence in two to fit everything in clearly.
(Also, having "sensitive" and "sensory" so close together could be confusing.)
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