Comparing two or more things

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How do I fix this sentence?

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Schachtel believed that adults are less sensitive to their earlier sensory perceptions due to socialization .
asked Mar 24 '13 at 19:13 Dianne D. Wright New member

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You have to answer the question "less sensitive than what?"

The pattern to follow is "A is less than B" or "C is more than D".

You may have to split your sentence in two to fit everything in clearly.

 

(Also, having "sensitive" and "sensory" so close together could be confusing.)

link comment answered Mar 25 '13 at 12:54 Simon Jones Contributor

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