Correcting writing mistakes.

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How can I correct my writing mistakes and get feedback on this page?

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He says the older children get, the more early childhood memories they lose .
asked Mar 24 '13 at 18:01 Dianne D. Wright New member

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You have discovered how to do it, Dianne.

When I read your sentence, the first thing that popped into my head was 'what do the older children get?'

Try this change.

 

He says that as children get older, they lose more early childhood memories.

link comment answered Mar 24 '13 at 18:38 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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