Correcting writing mistakes.
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He says the older children get, the more early childhood memories they lose .
You have discovered how to do it, Dianne.
When I read your sentence, the first thing that popped into my head was 'what do the older children get?'
Try this change.
He says that as children get older, they lose more early childhood memories.
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