An unloaded gun is the safest gun, the best thing when using safety tips keep the gun unloaded until your about to use it (Adresti James).
An unloaded gun is the safest gun, the best thing when using safety tips keep the gun unloaded until your about to use it .
There are several problems with this sentence. I would complete the first sentence after 'gun'. What comes next is a jumble of words, which I will straighten out. You want the word "you're", the contraction for you are, rather than 'your', the possessive pronoun.
An unloaded gun is the safest gun. The best safety tip is to keep the gun unloaded until you're about to use it.
My father was a US Marine in WWII, and he taught me at an early age that there is no such thing as an unloaded gun. That's my best safety tip. It means that you always treat every gun as if it were loaded.
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