comma usage

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Should I put a comma before the word resulting?

Deceptive campaign ads have persuaded the majority of California voters to vote no on proposition 37 resulting in the continued dis-empowerment of consumers to make informed decisions at the market.

 

Thanks for the answer.

I am still working on this.

I would like to take out the word have-and write-deceptive advertisments persuaded...

comma edited Mar 25 '13 at 02:01 betresse New member

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Yep.

 

You could also remove the hyphen in disempowerment.

link comment answered Mar 21 '13 at 22:12 Wallid Fielding New member

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