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How to make this sentence is more appropriate

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Besides that, an excess of binder is wasteful, slows the subsequent debinding and results in greater dimensional shrinkage during sintering .
asked Jun 26 '11 at 15:38 hussain New member

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That depends whether the conjunction is an internal or external connector. *Besides that* at the start of the sentence is fine (followed by comma) if it is connecting to the preceding sentence.

 

Hussain, your sentence is ok. Perhaps try "Besides that, an excess of binder is wasteful and slows the subsequent debinding, resulting in / which causes greater ...."

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An excess of binder is wasteful and besides that it slows the subsequent debinding the results in greater dimentional shrinkage during sintering.

link answered Jun 26 '11 at 17:40 Louie Angelo Sacedor New member

try only ( ">) Louie Angelo SacedorJun 26 '11 at 17:42

try only ( ">) Louie Angelo SacedorJun 26 '11 at 17:42

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