Passive Voice 2

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Here is another example, when I describe my social network in high school.

See example:

I never felt I was a part of any smaller cliques but prided myself on being associated with most of the affinity groups without actually being in one.
asked Jun 23 '11 at 20:49 Jerald Jansen New member

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I think you can make this less wordy by using the verb 'to be' less and finding more exact constructions to convey your meaning.  

 

Have a look:

 

I never felt I was a part of any smaller cliques, but prided myself on my association with most of the affinity groups without actually being in one.

link comment answered Jun 24 '11 at 14:39 Kimberly Expert

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