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Trying to make this question a little less wordy

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It is my belief that this information will help patients know what and why they are using their medications and help nurses when they are administering the medication to provide adequate teaching about the medication.
asked Mar 10 '13 at 00:59 zoe williams New member

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The wordiness here is caused by the repetition of medication and unnecessary phrases such as it is my belief that:

 

This information will enable nurses to better educate patients about their medication at the time of its administration.

link comment answered Mar 10 '13 at 01:30 Shawn Mooney Expert

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