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Thing I like to do ; reading and photographing . These are two of my favourite hobbies . I feel like I want to get up in the morning start reading my new book and never do something else till I finish it . I enjoy reading , each line give me a space to meditate and an idea to creat something .! I ( like ) ( love ) taking photos with a camera -  Preferably Nikon type - i believe that photographing has noble goals : documenting facts , showing the truth , so that encourages me becoming a proffesional photographer beside that nothing more beautiful than taking a photo with you company then keep it  on you room wall .

asked Mar 06 '13 at 18:07 JOUDI New member

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Joudi, this passage has a great number of errors, more than can be discussed for one question. This is not an editing service, but we can give you some direction to help you learn.

Many of the errors relate to punctuation. With the exception of the hyphen, punctuation does not have a space before it. Studying the rules for punctuation is one step you'll need to take in order to learn how to write in English.

link comment answered Mar 07 '13 at 13:18 Patty T Grammarly Fellow
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Joudi, this passage has a great number of errors, more than can be discussed for one question. This is not an editing service, but we can give you some direction to help you learn.

Many of the errors relate to punctuation. With the exception of the hyphen, punctuation does not have a space before it. Studying the rules for punctuation is one step you'll need to take in order to learn how to write in English.

link comment answered Mar 07 '13 at 13:18 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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