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Having knowledge of a community and knowing its issues can be very effective, because the practitioner can begin identifying the problems, and focus on whose being affected.
asked Jun 17 '11 at 22:21 Kaneshia C Hunt New member

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"and focus on whose being affected"

 

Possessive pronoun doesn't sound right to me

link comment edited Jun 18 '11 at 19:45 Gabedude Contributor
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Having knowledge of a community and knowing its issues can be very effective because the practitioner can begin identifying the problems and focus on those people being affected.

link comment answered Jun 21 '11 at 16:49 Kimberly Expert
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Having Knowledge in the commuinty and knowing its issues can be very effective. Those who know can easily begin identifying the problems and focus those peolpe being affected

link comment answered Jun 22 '11 at 06:13 Umu_bushra New member

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