Help with changing a sentence
How can I change this sentence?
See example:
Having knowledge of a community and knowing its issues can be very effective, because the practitioner can begin identifying the problems, and focus on whose being affected.
asked Jun 17 '11 at 22:21
Kaneshia C Hunt
New member
Kaneshia C Hunt
New member
3 answers 
"and focus on whose being affected"
Possessive pronoun doesn't sound right to me
| link comment |
edited Jun 18 '11 at 19:45
Gabedude
Contributor
|
Having knowledge of a community and knowing its issues can be very effective because the practitioner can begin identifying the problems and focus on those people being affected.
| link comment |
answered Jun 21 '11 at 16:49
|
Having Knowledge in the commuinty and knowing its issues can be very effective. Those who know can easily begin identifying the problems and focus those peolpe being affected
| link comment |
answered Jun 22 '11 at 06:13
Umu_bushra
New member
|
