Gramatically Incorrect

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I found this sentence in someone's blog. I find it redundant (also, other, too) and the word stories used incorrectly. After reading this I wanted to find out if other people agreed.

How do you think it should read?

 

I have also posted many other stories too on this blog.

 

My answer:
Additionally, in this blog, I have posted numerous stories independent of this one.

 

Do you think it should read this blog or my blog?

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I agree, Lee, it is quite redundant.  I don’t have a problem with the word stories.  There are many ways the sentence could be improved.  The simplest way would be to delete the words also and too.

 

I have posted many other stories on this blog. 

 

Either this blog or my blog could be used.   

link comment answered Feb 20 '13 at 13:16 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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