I found this sentence in someone's blog. I find it redundant (also, other, too) and the word stories used incorrectly. After reading this I wanted to find out if other people agreed.
How do you think it should read?
I have also posted many other stories too on this blog.
Additionally, in this blog, I have posted numerous stories independent of this one.
Do you think it should read this blog or my blog?
I agree, Lee, it is quite redundant. I don’t have a problem with the word stories. There are many ways the sentence could be improved. The simplest way would be to delete the words also and too.
I have posted many other stories on this blog.
Either this blog or my blog could be used.
|link comment||answered Feb 20 '13 at 13:16 Patty T Grammarly Fellow|
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