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Narcissus saw his reflection in a pond and falls in love with himself. He suffers the same pain that caused to others and destroys him and dying of grief for not being reciprocated.

asked Jun 12 '11 at 15:38 Oscar W Revilla New member

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You have a tense disagreement.  'Saw' is past tense and 'falls' is present.  Make sure that everything is in the past or present tense, but not both.

link comment answered Jun 16 '11 at 13:02 Kimberly Expert

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