Please correct the sentence. Thanks

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Sentance:

Near  the end of the life curve, A Second Childhood is started.

 

Meaning:

 When people getting older, they changed to childhood chartacter.

 

 

I dont know my sentance is correct, please help me.

 

Modified after Suggestion:

Near the end of the life, the second childhood is started.

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Place the before second in stead of a.
The word curve is not clear to me. In my opinion it should be removed.

In the second sentence, which is stating the meaning, place get in stead of getting and change in stead of changed.

link comment answered Feb 18 '13 at 11:13 Rahul Gupta Expert

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