Please correct the sentence. Thanks

Sentance:

Near the end of the life curve, A Second Childhood is started.

Meaning:

When people getting older, they changed to childhood chartacter.

I dont know my sentance is correct, please help me.

grammar sentance meaning corrections asked Feb 17 at 16:16

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Place the before second in stead of a.
The word curve is not clear to me. In my opinion it should be removed.

In the second sentence, which is stating the meaning, place get in stead of getting and change in stead of changed.

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answered Feb 18 at 11:13

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