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Can you make these question parallel?

 

 

To go on picnics, taking part in sports, and vacationing with my family are my favorite summer activities.
 

 

We have begun to exercise more, to get regular check-ups, and dieting.

 

 

 

asked Feb 14 '13 at 19:40 maria New member

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Your parallel problems are because you are mixing infinitives and participles in the same sentence. They should all be one or the other.

 

Going on picnics, taking part in sports, and vacationing with my family are my favorite summer activities.

 

We have begun exercising more, getting regular check-ups, and dieting.

link comment edited Feb 14 '13 at 19:56 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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