What would be a better way to write this sentence?
Fortunately my parents had preplanned their funerals so that much of the burden was taken off of my father.
You need a period after 'fortunately'. Next, we have to make the subject of the sentence perform the action of taking the burden off of your father.
Fortunately, my parents had preplanned their funerals, which took much of the burden off of my father.
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