Passive Voice
What would be a better way to write this sentence?
See example:
Fortunately my parents had preplanned their funerals so that much of the burden was taken off of my father.
asked Feb 13 at 21:12
Tycia Small
New member
Tycia Small
New member
1 answer 
You need a period after 'fortunately'. Next, we have to make the subject of the sentence perform the action of taking the burden off of your father.
Fortunately, my parents had preplanned their funerals, which took much of the burden off of my father.
| link comment |
answered Feb 13 at 22:14
Lewis Neidhardt
Expert
|
