Grammarly says: Review for missing verb. (could)

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She was tiny, and her hands were disfigured, and I could hardly contain my shock and sadness. 

asked Feb 12 '13 at 20:27 Susan New member

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I don't know what it is looking for, Susan.  Maybe you confused it with all of the ands in your sentence. 

 

She was tiny, her hands were disfigured, and I could hardly contain my shock and sadness.

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She was tiny and her hands were disfigured.  I could hardly contain my shock and sadness.  

link answered Feb 12 '13 at 22:14 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

I like that 1st example and I'm gonna use it in my devotional. Thanks Patty!

SusanFeb 13 '13 at 00:28

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