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(This is a part of my project)

 

"Water, it has evolved for long period of time with mankind. Water is the most fundamental for us. We should feel guilty. and prepare for next generation. KOR (water Vessel company) lets people enjoy stylish water at the same time. you become free for guilt.

asked Feb 12 '13 at 08:39 Silver Kim New member

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No, Silver Kim, this makes no sense at all.  In addition to the many grammatical errors, water has not evolved.  It is a molecule made of two hydrogren atoms and one oxygen atom.  Regardless of whether one believes in evolution or creation by a god, water has not changed.  Even if you remove evolution from your passage and correct the grammatical mistakes, it still makes little sense.

link answered Feb 12 '13 at 10:58 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

Thanks for answering my question!What if I use "water, it has been changed its outfit by human since it was formed."I just want to mean that people utilized water in various ways. For instance, most great civilizations were built around water, and people now looking for clean water in a fancy bottle.

Silver KimFeb 12 '13 at 17:33

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