Do you think this makes sense?
(This is a part of my project)
"Water, it has evolved for long period of time with mankind. Water is the most fundamental for us. We should feel guilty. and prepare for next generation. KOR (water Vessel company) lets people enjoy stylish water at the same time. you become free for guilt.
No, Silver Kim, this makes no sense at all. In addition to the many grammatical errors, water has not evolved. It is a molecule made of two hydrogren atoms and one oxygen atom. Regardless of whether one believes in evolution or creation by a god, water has not changed. Even if you remove evolution from your passage and correct the grammatical mistakes, it still makes little sense.
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