Which word or phrase bwest describes the problem with clarity in this sentence?
Wordiness Imprecision Awkward, Misplaced modifier
See example:
Sikorsky's logical facts support the idea that very little truth exists in the legends.
2 answers 
I think Grammarly's Editor would be happier if the modifier 'in the legends' were placed after 'that' instead of at the end of the sentence.
This sentence is generally fine.
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answered Jun 11 '11 at 20:49
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The whole sentence is twisty...
It says very little with too many words. ("support the idea that" is wordy, just state the fact!)
Try this:
"Sikorsky's logical conclusions show that very little truth exists in legends."
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answered Mar 08 '12 at 02:02
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