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provides a similar view regarding the significance of epistemological evidence as he defines epistemology as what we regard as knowledge and what is the evidence of regarding this as knowledge and he believes that the evidence is crucial to make knowledge; as knowledge otherwise it will be beliefs and knowledge cannot be built on these beliefs.
asked Jun 08 '11 at 23:13 Reem Ahmed New member

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This is a long and wordy sentence.  I suggest the following changes:

 

SUBJECT NEEDED provides a similar view regarding the significance of epistemological evidence. He defines epistemology as that which we regard as knowledge and that which is the evidence of regarding it as knowledge. Furthermore, he believes that the evidence is crucial to the creation of knowledge because without it knowledge would be only beliefs, and knowledge cannot be built on belief alone.

link comment answered Jun 11 '11 at 20:53 Kimberly Expert
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on the next billing statement? I paid for services in November, there has been no other request for your services. Will there be a 59.00 charge each month? Until I have a better understanding of the process, I'm requesting my account be closed.

 

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link comment answered Dec 05 '13 at 13:55 Ms H J Ross New member

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