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what should i change in this sentence?

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The President and Coordinator pleaded with Ms Reeves to make the payment on the due-date.
asked Feb 09 '13 at 11:13 Abraham Weagbah New member

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Abraham,

 

Your sentence is basically okay, but, if the President is a different person from the Coordinator,  you also need the before Coordinator (the Coordinator).  Also, you need a period after Ms (Ms.) and you don't need a hyphen between due and date (due date).

 

I hope this helps.

link comment answered Feb 09 '13 at 11:34 Shawn Mooney Expert

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