what should i change in this sentence?
The President and Coordinator pleaded with Ms Reeves to make the payment on the due-date.
Your sentence is basically okay, but, if the President is a different person from the Coordinator, you also need the before Coordinator (the Coordinator). Also, you need a period after Ms (Ms.) and you don't need a hyphen between due and date (due date).
I hope this helps.
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