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I am not sure how to rewrite this sentance so that it does not have a confusing modifier.

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In the very foreseeable future, our hospital will start to treat patients with severe heart disease that require a machine to artificially function as the left ventricle.
asked Feb 03 '13 at 18:29 Alison Waggoner New member

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