social studies standards arizona

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And what it is the primary purposed to help students become better citizen and knowledgeable of culture diversity, now the Arizona social studies incorporated also define what is social studies and why is important as well is the National curriculum standards for social studies they provided a framework for teachers to fallow the curricula to plan what should students from pre-k through twelve grade most master in school.
asked Feb 03 '13 at 00:55 Carmen I. Ortiz New member

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Carmen, there are many errors in this very long run-on sentence.  Some of the phrases have clearly used the wrong word, there are missing words, and other parts just don’t make any sense at all.  Try separating this into several simple sentences.  

link comment answered Feb 03 '13 at 03:13 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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