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People that read this paragraph can reflect about the responsibility the press has in our society.

asked Feb 02 '13 at 19:00 priscila New member

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These two changes will make this sentence correct.

 

 People WHO read this paragraph can reflect ON the responsibility the press has in our society.

 

A much simpler version that means the same thing:

 

This paragraph is about the responsibility of the press in our society.

 

There are many other ways to say this, as well.

link comment answered Feb 02 '13 at 20:59 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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