what is wrong with my sentence?

People that read this paragraph can reflect about the responsibility the press has in our society.

asked Feb 02 at 19:00

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These two changes will make this sentence correct.

People WHO read this paragraph can reflect ON the responsibility the press has in our society.

A much simpler version that means the same thing:

This paragraph is about the responsibility of the press in our society.

There are many other ways to say this, as well.

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answered Feb 02 at 20:59

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