what is wrong with my sentence?
People that read this paragraph can reflect about the responsibility the press has in our society.
These two changes will make this sentence correct.
People WHO read this paragraph can reflect ON the responsibility the press has in our society.
A much simpler version that means the same thing:
This paragraph is about the responsibility of the press in our society.
There are many other ways to say this, as well.
|link comment||answered Feb 02 '13 at 20:59 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow|
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