Should this be "his" or "the"

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The wisest man of his day, King Solomon failed to heed his own advice and fell into idolatry.

 

The wisest man of the day, King Solomon failed to heed his own advice and fell into idolatry.  

asked Feb 02 '13 at 13:45 Susan New member

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I would use 'his day'. It makes it more personal to Solomon.

link comment answered Feb 02 '13 at 15:52 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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