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faulty parallesim?

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She sought out what she did not know and improved upon what she learned.
asked Feb 02 '13 at 00:18 William Ownbey New member

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She sought out what she did not know, and improved upon what she had learned.

link comment answered Feb 02 '13 at 03:54 sanjay Expert

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