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I for one do not ever want to make the living or dying choice for no patient or family member because I know personally how hard that choice truly is and I would encourage the one who has to make the decision to seek God in prayer and let God's will be done.
asked Feb 01 '13 at 02:07 Audra Johnson New member

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I, for one,  do not ever want to make the living or dying choice for no patient or family member because I know personally how hard that choice truly is, and I would encourage the one who has to make the decision to seek God in prayer.  Let God's will be done( Sorry,I did not get the meaning.)

link comment answered Feb 01 '13 at 04:19 sanjay Expert

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