pl. correct the sentance below

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At times system runs slow, makes many of us get frustrated by repeated login

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At times system runs slow, makes many of us get frustrated by repeated login.
asked Jan 30 '13 at 18:32 Pauline Jojo New member

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Peter's correction almost nails it, but there are a couple of mistakes.

There should be a comma after 'times' but none after 'slowly'. This is a compound predicate, 'runs' and 'makes', with a single subject, 'system', and no comma is needed. Another error is 'repeatedly' is splitting the infinitive 'to login'.

 

At times, the system runs slowly and makes many of us frustrated because we have to login repeatedly.

 

Here's a simpler approach.
 

At times, the system runs slowly and frustrates us because we have to login repeatedly.

link comment answered Jan 30 '13 at 20:38 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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At times the system runs slowly, and makes many of us frustrated because we have to repeatedly login. 

link comment answered Jan 30 '13 at 19:29 Peter Meleney New member

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