i need help fixing this parallelism

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i don't know what it is talking about

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Doc turned to see her holding her panties out at the top and turned red in the face.
asked Jun 06 '11 at 04:47 trixie New member

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Get rid of the second 'turned'[

 

try ;  Doc turned to see her holding her panties out at the top and his face grew red.

link comment answered Jun 06 '11 at 07:20 catherine New member

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