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So, I cannot stress this enough, one must keep a copy of one files on a disk or CD.
asked Jan 29 '13 at 20:43 Mary Denson New member

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The original should read: "So, I cannot stress this enough: one must keep a copy of one's files on a disk or CD."

 

But I would change it to "I cannot stress enough the importance of keeping copies of your files on a disk or CD."

link comment answered Jan 29 '13 at 23:45 Lauren Shwarts New member

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