correction
correct the sentence
See example:
Oneday you will lose important data, it is really a shame when important files get lost.
asked Jan 29 at 20:33
Mary Denson
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Mary Denson
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1 answer 
There are several corrections that need to be made.
'One day' is two words and should be followed by a comma.
You have what is called a comma splice. This is two independent clauses connected with only a comma. You need either comma and a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon. You could also make this two sentences.
One day, you will lose important data, and it is really a shame when important files get lost.
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answered Jan 29 at 20:57
Lewis Neidhardt
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