Bus 490-Comprehensive Analysis
While the development of smart phones and higher mobile devices has shaped a novel opening, retailer are showcasing promotions and offers to customers.
Please reword this sentence. Thanks
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While the development of smart phones and higher mobile devices has shaped a novel opening, retailer are showcasing promotions and offers to customers.
asked Jan 28 at 02:58
Xenia Castell
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Xenia Castell
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I don't know what "has shaped a novel opening" means. "Retailer" should be plural.
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answered Jan 28 at 03:30
Patty T
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