Bus 490-Comprehensive Analysis

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While the development of smart phones and higher mobile devices has shaped a novel opening, retailer are showcasing promotions and offers to customers.

Please reword this sentence. Thanks

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While the development of smart phones and higher mobile devices has shaped a novel opening, retailer are showcasing promotions and offers to customers.
asked Jan 28 '13 at 02:58 Xenia Castell New member

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I don't know what "has shaped a novel opening" means.  "Retailer" should be plural.

link comment answered Jan 28 '13 at 03:30 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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