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This is because, Christianity emerged and protested from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people would suppose it to .
asked Jan 27 '13 at 23:35 francisco colon New member

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I don't know what you mean by 'protested from Judaism'. You don't need the comma after 'because'. '...would suppose it to.' is not a good phrase.

 

This is because Christianity emerged  from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people believe.

 

I hope this helps.

link comment answered Jan 27 '13 at 23:42 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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