what would sound better for this sentence
This is because, Christianity emerged and protested from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people would suppose it to .
I don't know what you mean by 'protested from Judaism'. You don't need the comma after 'because'. '...would suppose it to.' is not a good phrase.
This is because Christianity emerged from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people believe.
I hope this helps.
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