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what would sound better for this sentence

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This is because, Christianity emerged and protested from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people would suppose it to .

asked Jan 27 at 23:35

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I don't know what you mean by 'protested from Judaism'. You don't need the comma after 'because'. '...would suppose it to.' is not a good phrase.

This is because Christianity emerged from Judaism, but it is not a continuation of Judaism as some people believe.

I hope this helps.

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answered Jan 27 at 23:42

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