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How this sentence should re write over coming the observations shawn

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The nature of civil and military relations has always hanged on a balance considering the latter has the arms that when used to project power and influence may suppress the larger civilian populace.
asked Jun 03 '11 at 15:57 Nishantha Manage New member

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You could try this:

The nature of civil and military relations has always hanged in the balance; the latter wielding the arms which, when used to project power and influence, may suppress the larger civilian populace.

link answered Jun 04 '11 at 00:56 Revisery.com Contributor

Are you sure it shouldn't be 'hung in the balance'? KimberlyJun 05 '11 at 19:18

You're right, it should be "hung in the balance". An oversight on my part! Revisery.comJun 05 '11 at 19:37

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