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If an individual loves another,than he or she would receives encouragement to enter into a formal marriage, gets the ful benefits from the community and society.
asked Jan 23 '13 at 23:18 Svitlana Mitchell New member

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You need a rewrite. See if this works:  When individuals love one another, they should be encouraged to enter into a formal marriage to get the full benefits provided by society and the community. I'm not sure you need both "society" and "and the community" because society encompasses the community.

link comment answered Jan 26 '13 at 18:37 Sandy New member

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