My niece needs some help with this paragraph for her website.

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Let me come to you and capture those special moments; big or small. Family portraits, pregnancy, individuals, head shots, pets and parties. At the heart of every photograph is the desire to convey your unique spirit and style, naturally.

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Family portraits, pregnancy, individuals, head shots, pets and parties.
asked Jan 21 '13 at 23:09 Wendy Leitch New member

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The semi-colon in the first sentence should be a colon.  The second sentence is not a sentence, but since this is for a website it might just be showing as a list and style choices can take artistic license.  Often, we see a list like this with bullets or ornaments between each item.  If commas are used, there should be a comma before and.  Otherwise, for the wording, see my answer to your other question.

link comment answered Jan 22 '13 at 02:34 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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