My niece needs some help with this paragraph for her website.
Let me come to you and capture those special moments; big or small. Family portraits, pregnancy, individuals, head shots, pets and parties. At the heart of every photograph is the desire to convey your unique spirit and style, naturally.
Family portraits, pregnancy, individuals, head shots, pets and parties.
The semi-colon in the first sentence should be a colon. The second sentence is not a sentence, but since this is for a website it might just be showing as a list and style choices can take artistic license. Often, we see a list like this with bullets or ornaments between each item. If commas are used, there should be a comma before and. Otherwise, for the wording, see my answer to your other question.
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