should i repharse

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Many years ago I came to America from the Caribbean ,where the education system is ridged, much different than in America.
asked Jan 21 '13 at 16:10 kathleen Silver New member

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The word you want to use is 'rigid', meaning unbending. You need a comma after 'many years ago'. I would change the final part to read more smoothly. I also eliminated the second use of 'America'.

 

Many years ago, I came to America from the Caribbean, where the education system is more rigid than it is here.

link comment answered Jan 21 '13 at 16:44 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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