should i repharse
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See example:
Many years ago I came to America from the Caribbean ,where the education system is ridged, much different than in America.
asked Jan 21 at 16:10
kathleen Silver
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kathleen Silver
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The word you want to use is 'rigid', meaning unbending. You need a comma after 'many years ago'. I would change the final part to read more smoothly. I also eliminated the second use of 'America'.
Many years ago, I came to America from the Caribbean, where the education system is more rigid than it is here.
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answered Jan 21 at 16:44
Lewis Neidhardt
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