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We would like to inform you that we will charge 0.35sr for each copy which include printer Maintenance, consumables and Tonners without printable media (i.e A3,A4 Papers)

asked Jan 21 '13 at 08:20 Nayeem Hameed Khan New member

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It would be the most natural to delete all of the extra details from your sentence, and you don't really need any of those modal verbs, either.  There is a 0.35sr photocopying charge per page. Or Photocopying costs 0.35sr per page.

 

For your information, here are the corrections for the other words that I've deleted in the revision:

 

-printer maintenance

-toner

-A3 and A4 paper

 

I have no idea what without printable media means in this context. 

link comment answered Jan 21 '13 at 12:31 Shawn Mooney Expert

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