Faulty parallelism

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What is the best way to revise this statement?

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Designing a classroom atmosphere where students feel welcome to participate in activities, engage in class discussions, and relate to their personal experiences is a major factor in creating an environment conducive for learning.
asked Jan 20 '13 at 17:53 Dedra Wilson-Patrick New member

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If the details given in the original sentence are important, they can be retained by simply reversing to sentence to read as follows: A major factor in creating an environment condusive to learning is designing a classroom atmosphere where students feel welcome to participate in activities, engage in class discussions, and relate their personal experiences. I would, however, change "where" to "in which."

link comment answered Jan 26 '13 at 18:46 Sandy New member

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