Passive voice

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How do I make the following sentence not passive?

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However, diagnostic technology is not distributed geographically equally and within the current healthcare model, a trained medical professional is necessary to recognize symptoms or interpret analyses.
asked Jan 19 '13 at 23:21 Katherine Pavlik New member

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Activ voice is 'not passive', by the way. Passive voice is correct grammer, but active voice is preferred. This sentence read fine in passive. Here is one way to write it in active voice. As long as the sentence is, it could be broken into two by ending the first after equal. If not, you need a comma after 'equal'.

 

However, the distribution of diagnostic technology is not geographically equal, and within the current healthcare model, a trained medical professional is necessary to recognize symptoms or interpret analyses.

link comment answered Jan 20 '13 at 01:29 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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