help with sentence structure
grammarly does not like this sentence. states poor use of comparison. I am at a block as to how to change it.
See example:
The ADN nurses that are older and will be retiring soon should not be required to go back to school for their BSN degree..
asked Jan 19 at 07:01
Monique LaBauve
New member
Monique LaBauve
New member
2 answers 
Older ADN nurses who will soon retire should not be required to obtain a BSN degree.
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answered Jan 19 at 07:44
Patty T
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Or, one more suggestion building on what Patty wrote: ADN nurses nearing retirement should not be....
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answered Jan 19 at 11:32
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