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grammarly does not like this sentence. states poor use of comparison. I am at a block as to how to change it.

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The ADN nurses that are older and will be retiring soon should not be required to go back to school for their BSN degree..
asked Jan 19 '13 at 07:01 Monique LaBauve New member

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Older ADN nurses who will soon retire should not be required to obtain a BSN degree.

link comment answered Jan 19 '13 at 07:44 Patty T Grammarly Fellow
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Or, one more suggestion building on what Patty wrote: ADN nurses nearing retirement should not be....

link comment answered Jan 19 '13 at 11:32 Shawn Mooney Expert

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