Correct my english please

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If you cannot ably  to interact with people around you, who knows you may have a talent to became public.

grammar asked Jan 18 '13 at 08:19 ayivoo New member

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I can correct the first part of your sentence, but the 2nd half (beginning with who knows...) makes so little sense that I can't understand what you are trying to say.

 

If you cannot interact well with the people around you is my correction to the first part.

 

As for the second part, perhaps you mean to say you may not have the talent to work with the public.

 

If you cannot interact well with the people around you, you may not have the talent to work with the public.

 

But my rewording of the second part is just a guess.  I hope this helps.

link answered Jan 18 '13 at 12:38 Shawn Mooney Expert

Your guess is better than mine would have been!

Patty TJan 18 '13 at 20:12

Sorry my explanation also bad English. I realized some person cannot interact with the people around them. But no body knows they may have a special skill or talent that whole world appreciate. Then they become public. I want to write a sentence to say that A person no need to worry if he cannot interact with the people around. But he need to brush up his skills and focus on it.

ayivooJan 21 '13 at 02:13

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