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Even though she had never been to school and only spoke passable English, she could add a column of four or five item prices without a calculator and hesitation.

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Even though she had never been to school and only spoke passable English, she could add a column of four or five item prices without a calculator and hesitation.
asked May 29 '11 at 17:11 Graham Hung New member

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Even though she had never been to school and only spoke passable English, she could add a column of four or five prices without a calculator or hesitation.

link comment answered Jun 11 '11 at 21:44 Kimberly Expert

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