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Contant threats to our national security have led to policies and a decrease in personal privacy that Americans have become accustomed too.

asked Jan 14 '13 at 05:41 Gussie Johnson New member

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Much better, Gussie.  Constant has a "s" in it, but that might be a typo. 

 

"Policies" needs a little bit more though, it is too general standing alone.  You could say new, changing, stricter, or something like that.

link comment answered Jan 14 '13 at 15:51 Patty T Grammarly Fellow

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