Thesis statement question
Contant threats to our national security have led to policies and a decrease in personal privacy that Americans have become accustomed too.
asked Jan 14 at 05:41
Gussie Johnson
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Gussie Johnson
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Much better, Gussie. Constant has a "s" in it, but that might be a typo.
"Policies" needs a little bit more though, it is too general standing alone. You could say new, changing, stricter, or something like that.
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answered Jan 14 at 15:51
Patty T
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