need to restructure sentence

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Hello,

Can you assist of retructure the sentence....

 

During reorganization in late 2011, (4Q), Ira was given the business license position.  Mary had minimal Business License experience and was able to accomplish the following:

asked Jan 11 '13 at 19:03 ira New member

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I would eliminate (4Q). Late 2011 would mean the fourth quarter. You may want to change the first sentence to active voice.

 

During reorganization in late 2011, Ira moved into the business license position.  Mary had minimal Business License experience and was able to accomplish the following:

link comment answered Jan 11 '13 at 19:34 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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