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By receiving a job in the field, it will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.

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By receiving a job in the field, it will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.
asked Jan 10 '13 at 15:03 Nikki Atkins New member

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'It' is the subject pronoun, but it doesn't have an antecedent. The sentence will be simpler and clearer by removing the introductory clause and the pronoun.

 

A job in the field will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.

link comment answered Jan 10 '13 at 15:41 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow

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