When Life Changes
How can I change this sentence?
By receiving a job in the field, it will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.
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By receiving a job in the field, it will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.
asked Jan 10 at 15:03
Nikki Atkins
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Nikki Atkins
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1 answer 
'It' is the subject pronoun, but it doesn't have an antecedent. The sentence will be simpler and clearer by removing the introductory clause and the pronoun.
A job in the field will allow me to utilize the information and techniques learned during my time of study.
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answered Jan 10 at 15:41
Lewis Neidhardt
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