how do I word this?
Ian and I stayed in touch, texting or calling everyday for two weeks He picked me up for our first date, it was on Valentines Day.
I would write the following:
Ian and I stayed in touch, texting or calling every day. He picked me up for our first date; it was on Valentine's Day.
*Note that everyday should be two words (because it's an adverb here), you need to break the sentences up, use a semi-colon instead of a comma (to avoid a comma splice), and include an apostrophe in Valentine's Day.
|link comment||answered Jan 09 '13 at 22:48 Michelle Webb New member|
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