Comparison Sentence

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Hey guys,

What's the best way to fix this sentence?

See example:

This tale may be nearer in tone to the old Shadow radio serials than to more recent comics.
asked Jan 08 '13 at 13:03 John Roberson New member

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I don't think you need to change anything. I like it! Since "The Shadow" is the name of the radio show, though, it should be in quotes.

 

If you wanted to simplify a little (and assuming you've already introduced the tale in the previous sentence), you could say:

 

Its tone may be closer to the old "Shadow" radio serials than to more recent comics.

link comment answered Jan 08 '13 at 15:55 Actually Holly Expert

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