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There are so many component variations to the condition that adequately considered when properly diagnosing.
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There are so many component variations to the condition that adequately considered when properly diagnosing.
asked Jan 08 at 03:49
Elizabeth Thomas
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Elizabeth Thomas
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On the assumption that it is necessary to consider the variations in order to make a proper diagnosis, I don't quite agree with Tolley's rewording. Instead, I would suggest the following:
"There are many variations to the condition that must be adequately considered (in order) to make a proper diagnosis."
"in order" is optional.
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answered Jan 08 at 07:31
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