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My sentence is kSince human brains haven't had an evolution in over millions of years the Egyptians had the same amount of brainpower as us.

Grammarly says to take out an before the word evolution?

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Since human brains haven't had an evolution in over millions of years the Egyptians had the same amount of brainpower as us.
asked Jan 06 '13 at 17:04 theresa New member

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Your best bet is to change the sentence to:

Since the human brain has not evolved in millions of years, it can be said that ancient Egyptians had the same amount of brainpower as humans today.

 

Hope this helps!

link comment answered Jan 06 '13 at 17:51 Eliana Powell New member

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