possesive nouns

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How do I make this sentence less wordy?

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The pride of a son in his father can inspire him all his life.
asked Jan 02 '13 at 16:41 Donna Boland New member

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This doesn't seem wordy, but here's another way to write this.

 

A son's pride in his father can inspire him all his life.

link comment answered Jan 02 '13 at 17:00 Lewis Neidhardt Grammarly Fellow
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Pride in his father can inspire a son for life.

link comment answered Jan 02 '13 at 18:19 Tony Proano Expert

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