possesive nouns
How do I make this sentence less wordy?
See example:
The pride of a son in his father can inspire him all his life.
asked Jan 02 at 16:41
Donna Boland
New member
Donna Boland
New member
2 answers 
This doesn't seem wordy, but here's another way to write this.
A son's pride in his father can inspire him all his life.
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answered Jan 02 at 17:00
Lewis Neidhardt
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Pride in his father can inspire a son for life.
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answered Jan 02 at 18:19
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